Thursday, June 11, 2009

The Tale of The Exile--The Third Night: Le Cirque d'Aberrations (Part 1)

Part 1: Purple Haze

The dark is all fuzzy. It hurts, too. Fuzzy, hurting darkness is not good. It's bad. I don't want to open my eyes. I'm afraid that the trolls with the hammers cracking away at my forehead will explode my eyeballs if I do.

The bullyboys have bound me up. They aren't very careful about how rough they are in dragging my limp carcass back to the surface. I fade in and out. It doesn't seem to take as long to reach the upper levels of the tunnels as it did getting down. It's still night outside.

I'm woken up by being hauled onto something straw-like. Must have passed out again. Where's Eric? Don't know. We've split up, been separated. The hay lurches. Oh. It's a wagon. I'm being carted away. A lantern glows. Iron wheels creak, and the wagon sways back and forth...

I wake again. We've stopped, and I'm being hauled to my feet. I groan. One eye cracks open, but everything's a blur. Is that a glass house?

I wake again. I'm lying on some kind of table. Pale ghostly women with gauzy cloths flutter over me. Am I dead? This can't be heaven, and it's too cold for The Belly...I'm dabbed with stinging ointments. Needles stitch my skin, thread binding wounds. My burned hand is anointed with cool cream and wrapped up. One of the ghosts breathes a sweet-smelling powder in my face. I giggle a little and think of snowflakes. And then I remember no more.

I don't know how long I've been dead to the world, but when I wake it's to a ray of sunlight in my face. I've missed sunlight so very much. I try to move, and instantly regret it. Ow. There isn't a part of my body that does not hurt right now. I groan instead. Ow again.

My limbs are stiff and sore from the last few days. My cuts have been stitched but they sting. I have bruised my bruises. The burns on my poor, abused hand ache at the slightest twitch. Still, I can move my fingers. I'll eventually recover. I think.

I try to raise my head. The world lurches, so I stop and fall back. Whoa. Dizzy. About this time I realize I'm laying on a very soft bed. I take a few deep breaths and try to sit up again. The dizziness comes, but I'm expecting it this time. I take a look around, and my gaze is drawn up.

Spend enough time anywhere, and you tend to get a sense of what that place considers normal. In Calisapas, wood is common in buildings, and you get stonework only for the really important place. The buildings of Miir are built of either clay brick in the poor areas or heavy, black stone, and wood is a luxury. Large panes of clear glass set into domed ceilings, like the one I'm looking at now, aren't a common sight in either city.

Glass is expensive and fragile. In Calisapas the summer storms would shatter a glass window to bits, so shutters are more practical. Here, glass is still a rarity, and the only place you'll see it is in decorative stained windows set into the noble manors of The Bastion. Large panes of glass like this means whoever has taken me in has money. And isn't afraid to show it off.

Well, that explains the sunlight. I have a wonderful view of the Western Ivthian Mountains and the rest of the city in as the sun goes down. But the view only emphasizes how blocky and grim the rest of the city is from the place I'm now resting in, and how very, very strange it is.

I see lightly glowing fireglass on the wall, arranged into an artistic mosaic showing a willowy figure frozen in a high dance step. The wall its set in is a delicate porcelain china, polished to a high shine. Spidery arches of the same ceramic form the dome. It's lovely but it seems fragile, as if a strong enough wind would shatter the whole structure into a million pieces of raining crystal death.

Something moves. I start, and hiss in pain. Ow. Sudden movements bad.

“Please, lie back sir. You are not well." A feminine voice says.

"I figured that out, thank you very much." I groan. I suddenly realize I'm naked underneath these silken sheets. How embarrassing. Slowly this time, I turn and look at the speaker. She seems almost to be made of porcelain herself, with her slim build, pale skin, and...

...silver hair, almond eyes that are slightly too large to be human, slitted pupils, pointed teeth, and pointed ears. She's an elf.

It's not that I have anything personal against them. It's just that as a child in Calisapas you hear these nasty stories about elven pirates. The elves don't like us very much, and the feeling is rather mutual. Bad blood that's been simmering between Arden and Horeti since the war. And it's unsettling to find Elves in Miir, several thousand miles from Elisar. Previous encounters with bogeymen in Miir make me paranoid.

She lowers her gaze. She has a chalice in her hands. "You are startled by me." she says dryly. “Why?”

"I'm startled by a lot. Being an Exile tends to do that." I say. "Um...where am I? And where are my clothes? And why am I not in a cell?”

"You are in Lair Dythanus, home to my House. Please drink this. It is for the pain." She hands me the chalice.

Um. Ok then. Still unsettled. The cup is filled with a sweet-smelling purple liquid. I take it, but I don't drink yet. Something is off here. "So. Are you Lord Dythanus?"

I didn't think it was possible for her to get paler. "I am of House Dythanus, but I am no lord, sir, nor wish to be. I am a mere physician with the Healer's Guild." I've heard elves are haughty and aloof, not trembling and servile. She's like a kicked cat, eyes darting around looking out for a cruel boot.

"So...hm. This is a little awkward. Where are my clothes?" I ask again. I dislike being naked in a strange Noble's mansion. Feeling exposed.

"I am sorry. Your clothes were torn and dirty, so they were discarded."

Great. There goes my favorite pair of pants. My ONLY pair, anyway.

"Do not be bashful. We will provide you with clean garments when you go before our Lord." We. As in more than one.

"And when will that be?"

She shakes her head. "When he sends for you. I apologize, but I cannot be more specific than that. Please, drink your medicine and rest." She pads lightly out of the room, leaving me alone.

There's this bad feeling in my gut not caused by my wounds. I watch the sun set for a while. The aches I have all over my body dull the beauty somewhat. I contemplate the cup in my hand.

I have no way of knowing what's actually in here. I don't know what Lord Dythanus wants with me, but I have a lot of paranoid guesses. Eric said this House took over all the Bliss Dens in town. There are lots of ways to dull pain. Some with worse side effects than others. But I've been in their care all day. They've had plenty of chances to dose me with something unpleasant.

The sun slips lower. I set the chalice aside. I can live with pain. Pain keeps me alert, stop me from being complacent. I watch the sun slip under the mountain. Night comes. I sit and ache for a while after the sun goes down. The dizziness eventually passes replaced by the occasional dip into drowsy naps.

I'm woken by movement, as the elf lady returns. As I suspected, she's not alone...she has a couple of friends bearing clothes. They move alike, they're dressed alike, and they even look alike. I wonder how closely they're related. The one who spoke to me is the prettiest, though.

"Our Lord requests you. Would you like us to dress you, or would you prefer to dress yourself?"

Exotic elf chicks dressing me up? Yes please. They get to work. It's not as fun or sexy as I thought it would be. They don't so much as comment on my nudity. Way to make a guy feel inadequate. Still, it's nice to be back in clean clothes. I have a white shirt, canvas trousers, and even boots. I feel as good as new. One thing missing.

"Where's my cap?" I ask.

The head nurse wrinkles her nose. "That bloody thing? It was discarded as a danger to your health."

"Give it back."

She arches an eyebrow. "I beg pardon?"

"I'm sorry I wasn't clear. I want my hat back. Get it,” I glare at her, pointing to my head, “or I make a new one from someone's skin."

She gasps. I don't blame her...I'm shocked at the words coming out of my own mouth. It's just a hat. Nothing to get violent over. She excuses herself hastily, and her two friends stare at me in silence. I'm beginning to wonder if I've gone deranged.

"So...um...on to the lord?"

Not a good recovery.

Monday, June 1, 2009

Interview with Thaumatrope

I've been asked to do an interview with Thaumatrope, a SF/F/H twitter e-zine. It's quite exciting. The interview process was a little strange--essentially Twitter-sized posts answering some of the Six Basic Questions. I'm excited...I don't get lots of calls for interviews. I'll post links when the interview is up.

Wednesday, May 27, 2009

Writing in Starts and Fits

I've been writing only intermittently for a while, because last week I lost my job. While this gives me more time, it also give me more stress, which hasn't done me any favors. Especially since I'm not entirely sure where I'm going with the Third Night. This is a pain, because I know what I want to do for the Fourth and Fifth Nights, as well as the Seventh. But I can live with this. Mostly I need to get some feedback, so I'm looking to join with some critique groups to get my mind working. It should help revise the versions of the story I have going now.

I am about a third to a half of the way through the Third Night. Part of the problem I'm having is that I'm introducing more characters and more description into this bit. I'm not worried about that.

The part I'm worried about is that this section is going to turn into a drug trip, which I want to be able to write realistically AND comprehensibly without having to go the step of actually getting high.

So it's a challenge. But I'm committed to writing this thing.

Thursday, May 14, 2009

New PDF Availible: The First Night!

It's here! The First Night of Gaven Morren's tale is available on Rapidshare.com. Again, I plan on editing these more, so please feel free to provide feedback and other comments!

Just a note:
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The Tale of Gaven Morren--The First Night: Into The Shadows by Anson Brehmer is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-Share Alike 3.0 United States License.
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Wednesday, May 13, 2009

The World of Aldora

The tale of Gaven Morren began as a dream of a world-building project called Aldora. The idea was of a shared world, using the Creative Commons, to give authors tools and weave a tapestry of ideas together, building on the ideas of others.

Miir was my contribution to this project. I wrote pages and pages of information on this city here, and used a few things from other authors. Other writers, in turn, took some of my ideas and fleshed them out in interesting and different ways. I plan on posting may of the Miir-specific background I posted there on this blog, but I feel I should acknowledge the project that helped me get this far in the first place.

Feel free to visit the AldoraWorld site and browse around. There is a LOT of information there, more than I could possibly fit into this story. And hey, if you feel like joining, it would be great to see the porject picking up steam again.

Tuesday, May 12, 2009

The Second night of Gaven Morren now available on PDF!

The Second Night of The Tale of Gaven Morren is now available on PDF at Rapidshare.com. I'm working on getting the First Night available as well, but for now enjoy the collection of the Second Night in all it's glory.

It's my goal to improve these PDFs as I go back and edit the story, and I would love to have some feedback, so if you've got some comments on things you liked or what could be improved, feel free to pass them along!

Just so you know:

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The Tale of Gaven Morren--The Second Night: Through the Belly of Miir by Anson Brehmer is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-Share Alike 3.0 United States License.
Based on a work at twitter.com.
Permissions beyond the scope of this license may be available at the_stray7@hotmail.com.

Monday, May 11, 2009

The Tale of The Exile--The Second Night: Though the Belly of Miir (Part 9)

Part 9: Pain and Penance


AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARGH! Ow! Oh-OW-that-sodding-hurts-it-sodding-hurts-it-HURTS-it-HURTS-it-HURTS!


Grabbed the muzzle...just as the gun went off...heat and FIRE...flash burned my hand...oh it hurts...Lucky I didn't blow my fingers off...Ow...Ow...I look at Eric...my vision's all blurry from the tears of PAIN down my face...please by the dragon don't let me be crippled...


He's moving...standing slowly...don't think he was hurt... ohthepainohgodwhydidIdothat... he looks at me...face all blurry, it's the tears...Being STABBED has hurt less than this...he's saying something...I think he's asking why..."I don't sodding KNOW why!" Left hand in agony...


It takes a minute or two for me to calm down. Breathing helps. The fact I'm not dead helps, too. Eric uses some of the sheets as a bandage. My hand REALLY hurts. I vaguely wonder if the makeshift bandage will vanish when the room does, but I find we're not in the room anymore.


"Gaven, I'm sorry."


"Yeah...you SHOULD be." I hiss. Bandage still here. "That was my last shot. Gun's useless now." I take a few more deep breaths. "Look. Killing yourself wouldn't help things. Just makes another dead person. And it's what they want. If you kill yourself, you're gone. You can't make up for what you did. You can't atone, and the Shadows get deeper. Do you want that?”


He shakes his head.


“Good. Clean the Shadows out of yourself first. And find me some Dragon-taken ICE." I'm rambling. Do I believe anything I'm saying? I don't know. It sounds good, though. Nice and heroic. He seems a bit more determined now. Good. I get to tell Naros to fuck off at least once more.


After a few more minutes of rest, I begin to feel more like myself. My hand hurts, but thankfully I don't seem to be crippled. I stand. "Well, Eric, I think we've dawdled enough." I say. "Let's find our guide and get out of these tunnels." He nods. He seems livelier.


We pick our way back out of the steam-filled tunnel, back towards the lava flow. The light of the daggers is much brighter now. We pass from the tunnel back into the cavern.


"I wonder where the goblin got to." Eric muses.


I look around...ah. THERE he is! "HEY! You little prick!" I shout, and run after him. My hand aches, so I cradle it against my side as I run. No pain will stop me, though. Eric follows behind. The Redcap's fast for such a tiny creature. I grab a rock with my off hand and chuck it at his legs. THWAP! He squeals. It slows him down enough for us to catch up. "You led us into a trap, you spawn of a whore." I hiss. "You're going to pay for that."


We've reached a ledge overlooking the lava. That would be a nice place to drop the little fetcher to his doom. I grab at him, and he bites. OW! "Tommy not fooled by Gravymourn!" It cackles. "Tommy knows REAL shadowlords. Like The Silver Lord, who will make you dance dead-waltz!"


"Yeah, well, the Silver Lord isn't here to save you NOW. Die in pain, spawn!" I snarl as I kick at it.


"Ooo! Manny-man so slow!" It giggles as it dodges away.


"Gaven!" Eric shouts. I look up, and hear the sound of bootfalls. SCAT! Bullyboys! How did they find us? The Redcap is grinning ear-to-ear.


"The Silver Lord's servants come for Manny-Man!" It sings. "Yer gonna gets yer face peeled off!"


SCAT! SCAT! SCAT!


The Bullyboys rush from the tunnels. They've all got truncheons and clubs ready. This was an ambush...they come from all sides. “Here you are!” one of the bullyboys chortles. “Led us all a merry chase, didn't ye? Well, thanks to our tiny friend here that's over now.”


He points to the Redcap, who shows a toothy grin as it eyes us. Filthy little bootlicker. It giggles at me. "You gonna die now, manny-man! Tommy iz good powrie. Bring manny-men to servants of the Silver Lord, who keeps powrie all well fed.”


Well that explains something. This "Silver Lord," probably Lord Dythanus, must be protecting the the goblins from the rest of the city watch. They WORK for him! Nice set up. He gets toadies and they get to hunt the city freely at night. No wonder the rest of the watch thought they were rumors.


I see Broke-Nose leering at me. “What's the matter? Got no clever words to save you now? All out of tricks?”


“Kroovy-head manny-man calls fire from sky!” The redcap points at me. “Watch close-close!” Well, fuck you too, little buddy. There's no fireglass to spark anyway. And I doubt they'd be as easily cowed by a few sparks as the Redcaps. Looks like we'll have to fight.


Eric stands at my back, sword ready. “Fancy a little scrap, Gaven?” he sounds way too cheerful. It's kinda scary. At least he's not moping. My hand hurts too much to use. Going to have to use my off-hand to grip my dagger. Awkward, but better than nothing.


"Sure. I need exercise. I'll take the ugly one." I quip.


Eric chuckles. "Rather spoiled for choices there, aren't you?"


"Seems that way."


The leader of the bullyboys narrows his eyes. “Enough of this. We've wasted a whole night chasing you down already. Take them!” They charge.


Back to back, Eric and I brace ourselves. Broke-Nose comes straight after me. I figured he would. He didn't seem too bright. He's smiling.


“Well now, wha--gak!” I start to speak, but the bastard jabs me in the throat with his truncheon.


“No talking for you!”


Alrighty then. I stomp on his foot, hard. Bones in his toes crack and he lets out an unholy shriek before I finish my kick, ringing his family bells. Down he goes, gasping for air. Beside me, Eric trips one of the bullyboys, who gets close enough to me that I can strike. I do.


The fireglass dagger flickers in the light of the lava pit. The bullyboy grunts as I tear through his heavy shirt and tag his side. Broke-nose is still sobbing on the ground, but there are four others, plus the goblin, who flits around us looking for an opening.


The leader moves in. I hear the air sing around his club as he swings at me. I panic, and try to block it with my burned hand. Bad move! I grunt in pain. My whole arm hurts. Great. Eric yelps as a pair of bullyboys thwack him with billy clubs. He's still standing, though.


Broke-Nose crawls to his knees and jabs his truncheon at me like a sword. What an idiot. I kick the club out of his hand. Then I run at him. He yelps as I plant a foot on his shoulder to leap over his head. I land and whip off my cap.


“Pay in Kroovy.” I hiss as I stab. He shrieks. Blood pours out his back. His breath rattles...I must have punctured a lung. I catch blood in my cap as he collapses. Scratch one bullyboy. I turn to the Redcap. “Now you get yours, traitor. It's time YOU did the dead-waltz.” Its eyes boggle, and it stares slack-jawed at me.


Uh-oh. Eric's not doing well. The leader's got his attention on me, but the other three are taking turns batting him around. Not good! “This would be a fine end.” He mutters as they surround him. “But it will not be mine today! I will make you pay for every bruise and blow!"


His pep talk seems to have helped him. He stands tall, then leaps at them, furiously slashing at them while leaving an opening for me. I slip back towards him, and we're back to back again. The leader steps up to me. “Fall down like a good boy!” he snarls as he swings. Miss!


The Redcap seems to have gotten its courage back. It darts in and tries to bite me again. OUCH! Filthy little spawn! I hope it's not rabid. I shake him around, trying to get it off. I struggle closer to the lava pit as I whip it back and forth. It begins to gnaw. OW! OW! OW! We dance around for a bit. The goblin clings like ivy as it gnaws me. I manage to pry it off...It drops, and teeters on the ledge. So I kick it, hard. The Redcap goes squealing into space, face frozen in numb shock before it vanishes into the lava pool below. I smile.


My joy is short-lived. The leader takes advantage of me dancing with Happy goblin Boy to sneak up behind me and whack me in the head.


Ooo. Stars. Pretty.


Then everything goes black.