tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762941814010686290.post7728449402283764394..comments2017-10-30T15:18:36.177-07:00Comments on Tales of The Stray: March Update--The beginning of the creative cycleThe Strayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00439399194077073258noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762941814010686290.post-45118715649071595752013-10-28T12:38:08.979-07:002013-10-28T12:38:08.979-07:00Still watching; still hoping.Still watching; still hoping.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762941814010686290.post-13435746638883251462012-10-14T19:43:37.537-07:002012-10-14T19:43:37.537-07:00That's ok. From what I've heard, readers a...That's ok. From what I've heard, readers always know when the story is going wrong, but don't always know *why*. And people generally know what they like, and it seems the last bit intrigued you. I'm doing a bit of backstory fill-in, as that helps me figure things out.The Strayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00439399194077073258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762941814010686290.post-50847313556111836612012-09-28T16:31:43.754-07:002012-09-28T16:31:43.754-07:00i like how Gaven has been starting to get more and...i like how Gaven has been starting to get more and more used to the Shadows, learning how they work, and the rules that govern them. When he was interrupted by Despair, and set his room on fire, he was about to figure something out, it seemed like it was something to do with the politics of the shadows, the relationships between them. maybe he could use that. Also, it reads like the voice in the NoxSavagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13230901108942104185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762941814010686290.post-50850789368341466292012-09-28T16:30:08.930-07:002012-09-28T16:30:08.930-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.NoxSavagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13230901108942104185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762941814010686290.post-63740779553891880282012-09-25T17:47:18.205-07:002012-09-25T17:47:18.205-07:00I am still alive, yes. Sorry about the long delay....I am still alive, yes. Sorry about the long delay...I've been wrapped up in work and other porjects for the last few months. I'm also trying to think my way out of the situation I put Gaven in last time...So I'd like to ask you for help. I'm trying to identify the things that are working in this story and the things that aren't quite working out. I'm trying to identify theThe Strayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00439399194077073258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762941814010686290.post-77614552666439516592012-09-25T11:50:46.850-07:002012-09-25T11:50:46.850-07:00Stray? are you still alive? we haven't heard f...Stray? are you still alive? we haven't heard from you in months.NoxSavagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13230901108942104185noreply@blogger.com